Great Charlie/Hurley banter throughout. You really nailed their goofy boyishness. I love how they freak over Locke's underwear and the girls eying up Desmond's chest. And how you gave context to their Sawyer stash raiding habit. Your Sawyer voice is also spot on!
Blue shirt really does deserve its own flashback. Though I must say I'm still very sad over the loss of white shirt in the hatch implosion. *sniff* RIP white shirt...
I must read more of your fics. You seem to write a lot of Desmond and we need more good Desmond writers on LJ so...GOOD.
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Date: 2007-12-04 12:14 am (UTC)Great Charlie/Hurley banter throughout. You really nailed their goofy boyishness. I love how they freak over Locke's underwear and the girls eying up Desmond's chest. And how you gave context to their Sawyer stash raiding habit. Your Sawyer voice is also spot on!
Blue shirt really does deserve its own flashback. Though I must say I'm still very sad over the loss of white shirt in the hatch implosion. *sniff* RIP white shirt...
I must read more of your fics. You seem to write a lot of Desmond and we need more good Desmond writers on LJ so...GOOD.