Ahhh, their first kiss! *dies* Beautifully written. And I love how Jack is noticing all the beauty that is Sawyer, from his green eyes to the soft lips to the dimples on his back. The dialogue and awkwardness was perfect for their first time, and you really conveyed the emotion perfectly. The ending, though it was uncertain as far as the "two men" thing was concerned, was awfully romantic. Of course Jack couldn't leave him! I have a happy/sad feeling now that it's over. This story was wonderfully written, Janie. I loved it.
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Date: 2009-03-07 10:37 pm (UTC)And I love how Jack is noticing all the beauty that is Sawyer, from his green eyes to the soft lips to the dimples on his back. The dialogue and awkwardness was perfect for their first time, and you really conveyed the emotion perfectly.
The ending, though it was uncertain as far as the "two men" thing was concerned, was awfully romantic. Of course Jack couldn't leave him!
I have a happy/sad feeling now that it's over. This story was wonderfully written, Janie. I loved it.